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original content.

What is the definition of an 'angel'? Well there are many definitions for it. According to Merriam-Webster dictionary, it is a spiritual being superior to humans is power and intelligence, an attendant spirit or guardian, white robed winged figure of human form in fine art, and many more. However, in 'The Very Old Man with Enormous Wings', the old man was an angel because a doctor determined that his wings were natural to his body, and also only good things happened after his arrival in Pelayo and Elisenda's courtyard. Also an old man didn't age but get younger and not only the Pelayo's family but all the people around them met an old man. He also got chick pox as he got younger and at last he disappeared. So, rather thinking that an old man is an imaginary character, he is an actual angel.

revised.

Angel in the novel 'The Very Old Man with Enormous Wings’ must be recognize as angel without no doubts. Also there can’t be assumption or points that angel must be illusion or hallucination because Pelayo’s family are not only people who saw an angel. He, an angle, had wings which determined by doctor that he born with. Usually human beings don’t have wings. Also he revived from the death, and clearly human beings can’t revive from the death. Lastly, he must be angel rather than something else because ever since he came, only the good events happened to Pelayo’s family.

I revised few major things.
First, I took out many Unnecessary words and sentences. I also took out the definition/dictionary parts. I fixed tone of the passage because last one was too casual. And I made my paragraph more concise and clear in both content and grammar.