‘A Very Old Man with Enormous Wings’
A very old man with enormous wings was an angel because of these several reasons. Not only the family but also doctor who took care of him saw and examine the angel. After the angel came, only the good event happened, or at least, none of the bad event happened. Lastly, usually angels are the kids flying around God; fully grown angel is common misconception of the people.
A very old man with enormous wings was an angel because of these several reasons. Not only the family but also doctor who took care of him saw and examine the angel. After the angel came, only the good event happened, or at least, none of the bad event happened. Lastly, usually angels are the kids flying around God; fully grown angel is common misconception of the people.
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Your thesis is a good start, but I would try to narrow down the argument you are making by stating your belief ("the man was an angel") followed by just a reason or two to uphold your argument.
You might say:
"The very old man with enormous wings was an angel because a doctor determined that his wings were natural to his body, and because only good things happened after his arrival in Pelayo and Elisenda's courtyard."
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